Wow, this is amazing! I couldn't do any better. The graphics are awesome, and it's very smooth, and funny, and it really should be coloured in because of how funny it is starting to look, and sound should be added if possible. I think you have a very good future as an animation artist is you want, possibly like Edd, yes it is that good. This is just... Wow. I love it Nick, and keep up the good work! (HI MY NAME IS BOB AND I AM TRYING TO TAKE UP WORDS I AM BRILLIANT LOLS GOOD BYES YOUR AWESOME)
For your first animation, this is HACKIN AWESOME!!! it was very stable and smooth throughout the whole thing, and it had a funny plot. You should ABSELOUTLEY colour this in and finish it. you know the drill from here. hi bloop bla fehwpfhpofi ehrwpoiry u i t t e r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r rr rr r r r r r r r r r r r rr r r r r r r r rr r r r r r r r r r r r KEEP IT ON
(HI MY NAME IS BOB AND I AM TRYING TO TAKE UP WORDS I AM BRILLIANT LOLS GOOD BYES YOUR AWESOME)
hi bloop bla fehwpfhpofi ehrwpoiry u i t t e r r r r r r r r r r r r r r r rr rr r r r r r r r r r r r rr r r r r r r r rr r r r r r r r r r r r
KEEP IT ON
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